Hi, i've finished a few chapters for my fallout fanfic now. I,m going to post my fanfic here if anyone wants to read it.
I was wondering (if you wouldn't mind) if you could look through the fanfic to improve it slightly, I'm not that god at describing situations/ developing ideas that much. If you can help me then click on the link below and make any changes you want. If you help i promise to give you credit in the footnote aswell
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2